Vibrancy of life

I write to free my soul from words without me, go unspoken. I write to make you think, thoughts you already know.

 

Vibrancy of life, felt by all around

Rooted and steady, deep within the ground

I move slowly and speak the same

Every moment counts, this is not a game.

 

My heart overwhelmed, by all I have seen

Souls; starving, weakened, forgotten and lean.

Do we understand who we are?

Surly not, we’ve fallen so far!

 

Who still listens to their soul, you?

It will tell who you are and what to do.

I for one understand,

I am more than who I am.

 

In silence listen, with strength speak

Ignorance of soul makes one weak.

So set aside earth bound cares

Step out of yourself, take the dares.

 

This life is short, too short to waste

Make a difference, in boldness and haste.

 

~Melody

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This has a zen quality to it. It makes us think of the universe and the vastness of it. It reminds us that we have a soul in there trying to guide us and keep us on the path of enlightenment. This has a great depth to it and it makes the mind and heart react together.

[André-J-Franklin]

ahh..the meditation music is what was playing i thought my chimes were ringing. Not only did like the the read it self but the smooth of the music push it farther.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

hi there, gorgeous and subtle questioning aptly placed and a fine struture and presentation

[J.L Hunter]

I try every day to come to terms with the things in my life, and the words in this poem strike me as utterly powerful. Thank you for writing this majestic piece.

[kristen]

This poem is very powerful, and beautiful, and makes complete sense as the end comes to a stop! Love it!

[Destinyxi]

Very nicely written! Keep it up!

[Yheela]

I take this to heart.
Life is too short to be afraid of living.

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Beautiful and inspiring. Great write xxx loved it :O)

[Poppie Mira]

my poem for the day, well done my friend.

[Geraldine]

Very inspiring and good write. It keeps you reading for more and more.. :D

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

It does speak to the heart, Melody. I think you've got a good angle on it while keeping in mind that there are infinite interpretations of this thought-pattern. But, it's one that is most worthy of pursuit in my opinion. Well done!