I loved this poem, especially the message. It seems today there aren't any 'origianl' ideas. Because so much has already been written, and we see where certain creations have taken people, but not always our own creations and where they can take us.
Each line was brilliant! I loved the entire piece. Simply beautiful.
This strikes my funny-bone. Reminds me of a time when one of those followers was following me, blindly. Just for kicks I started going in circles to see how long he would follow. He actually went the circle a couple of times before activating his brain and realizing I was playing around. When I was younger, and mischievous, me and a friend would stand on a street corner looking up and pointing, waiting for people who would also stop and stare upwards. Always caught a few. Be forewarned--I am like that. Your poem is expressive.
Sounds like a cult leader in the making planning a wake up call for some followers. He's not the messiah he's just a very naughty boy. Cool picture. Interesting perspective. I wonder what the big secret is?
I changed some of the spelling as to allow a better flow to all that get tripped up on it. Some words are left the way they are left, because that's how I want it. I honestly have a spelling level of a fourth grader and after three years in college, my brain still makes it the way it is. I love my brain! As wonderfully, goofy, defined and off track it is...it's incredibly original and wouldn't trade it for the world! I have to spell check every comment, verse and message I put on here...sometimes I don't want too and that’s all I have to say about that. ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
i removed my criticism of your spelling. thank you for the explanation and the corrections you made... read morei removed my criticism of your spelling. thank you for the explanation and the corrections you made. i enjoyed the poem this time through and even learned a new word, red-neck or not.
12 Years Ago
I hope you never remove anything you say again. I love everything that everyone says on here and you.. read moreI hope you never remove anything you say again. I love everything that everyone says on here and you in no way criticised me. I am never offended and love when others use their voice. thank you.
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