I Love You.

I do not write to make you happy, nor to hear you agree. I write to make you think as thought will set your soul free.

 

I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook.

 

We give the meaning no meaning!

Shaken it to the core.

Delve past the spoken, take action,

show you mean something more.

 

 The moments that fell by the way,

replaced, by I Love You.

Rekindle its fire, create spark,

by the things you can do.

 

A man can lose his voice its true.

Be known for what you do.

In a world that has lost all trust

Show them that, I Love You.

 

~Melody

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

"I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook."
^^loved that stanza:)
Anyways the whole poem was very good, and a nice and not over-used concept. Well written indeed. Good job:)
God Bless

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This is a great poem with a great message. You pulled off the rhyming structure very well:)

[Ian H Morrison]

excellent really enjoyed well written and full of thought

[Michael G.]

Great thoughts about a great theme. You can't say it enough, and you have to be able and ready to back it up. It always takes two.

[quinfinn]

this is poignant and beautiful. so many of us abuse and misuse the words "i love you" until the words become meaningless and deflated in importance. i agree wholeheartedly that to convey love you must employ your heartfelt actions and that the words can actually mean something deep and sincere when you have shown them to be truly represented by your intent and passion. well said, and well written!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love your poem, showing I love you really is what does it...
great poem :)

[Rhea752]

if you say i word or phrase enough times then it loses it's meaning. you have captured this in your poem then made it even more intimate by using the phrase I Love You. well done Melody!! i really enjoyed this poem.

[marytownsend]

Very powerful line, 'Be known for what you do'. Words can sometimes be over used to the point of being meaningless but our actions can be what truely defines our character. Great poem!

[Layla J Omorose]

Another good poem. Actions always speaks louder than words. So often people think that just saying the words are enough. They forget the feeling and the actions that it took to get to that place. Well done.

[lee von cleef]

A man can lose his voice its true,the weight of his eye,brush of his hand,square of his hip,arch of his smile,unspoken time will bring him ,Time and a swift boot to the butt.

[SmileBig :)]

This is so beautiful! I love it so much! you are so right, love has lost its meaning. so many people say it nowadays after like, a week!