I Love You.

I do not write to make you happy, nor to hear you agree. I write to make you think as thought will set your soul free.

 

I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook.

 

We give the meaning no meaning!

Shaken it to the core.

Delve past the spoken, take action,

show you mean something more.

 

 The moments that fell by the way,

replaced, by I Love You.

Rekindle its fire, create spark,

by the things you can do.

 

A man can lose his voice its true.

Be known for what you do.

In a world that has lost all trust

Show them that, I Love You.

 

~Melody

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

"I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook."
^^loved that stanza:)
Anyways the whole poem was very good, and a nice and not over-used concept. Well written indeed. Good job:)
God Bless

[Freedom's Child]

Incredible! Perfect look at a group of words used way to frequently for a matter of course. The flow is keeps you moving steady and absorbing the words. "Merely a worm on a hook" is such great imagery and completely fitting. Very well crafted poem with great value.

[Gothic Girl]

at first, i thought that this was yet another cheesy poem because of the title. i read through the poem and i was wrong. this is true love to the core. great poem ma'am. such sincere thoughts. :)

[Pencrafter]

Your poem states the universal truth of actions speaking louder than words. Talk is cheap, and could even be a lie. While love should be spoken it should also be demonstrated by action. Nice poem and interesting font.

[darkness*star1985]

I like this poem, I used to believe in the words "I love you" but not much anymore. Great work as always.

[Heather]

very well written, it stands up and proves itself in the name of love!

[Lily Mae]

Your work is always hopeful, spiritual and uplifting.. Always a positive to the negative.. I love reading you for that reason..xo

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You are so kind!

[Lisa Ring]

Keen observation and well written. Great job!

[Amelia]

Its a meaningful and cute poem. I loved the first stanza. It showed your creativity and view of the concept which was really interesting to see. Good work :)

[caroline]

Good poem because I like how it shows how actions back up words.

[ROSALIND]

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE ........
MORE PLEASE