I Love You.

I do not write to make you happy, nor to hear you agree. I write to make you think as thought will set your soul free.

 

I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook.

 

We give the meaning no meaning!

Shaken it to the core.

Delve past the spoken, take action,

show you mean something more.

 

 The moments that fell by the way,

replaced, by I Love You.

Rekindle its fire, create spark,

by the things you can do.

 

A man can lose his voice its true.

Be known for what you do.

In a world that has lost all trust

Show them that, I Love You.

 

~Melody

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

"I love you, such words of power,

like a thief your heart took.

Words that have lost their raw luster,

merely a worm on hook."
^^loved that stanza:)
Anyways the whole poem was very good, and a nice and not over-used concept. Well written indeed. Good job:)
God Bless

[Virtuosa X]

OMG!! I love this!!!
Like, Literally!!

[Rusty]

Thank you.

[MOON]

Dep write we live on the surface really.

[WILDERNESS]

beautiful, absolutely

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I really liked this, the power of i love you, if only i could go back to the days when those words were all someone wanted to hear. Sometimes your not complete until you hear it. Great piece, i loved it x

[Rox Bain ☮]

This is beautiful :D

[Megan Simpson]

You have a very good point. People need to not just say something, but also show that they mean it. Good piece, really got me thinking!

[dillonjensen]

A powerful poem you have here that speaks volume to the world. The last stanza says it all in my opinion. Outstanding.

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed for the famous 3 letter
words said in different languages and believed
in it by people all over the world ....

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is meaningful and it took me to a lot of different places.
Emotions, tenderness, love flows in it, and you expressed that very well.
Wonderful.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D