I Love You..A Poem From My Daughter to Me....

This poem is from my daughter Victoria (aka) V.J.C. I will cherish this always as it is now written on the walls of my soul. I am more proud of her, than she will ever be of me!

I LOVE YOU

 

Life so fragile,

you make it worth the while.

The smile on your face,

brightens my day.

 

Never asking much,

Giving without a thought.

Did I ever tell you,

I love you?

 

Firm grasp,

Gently guiding.

Understanding beyond your years,

Wisdom of gold!

 

Did I ever tell you,

I Love You?

Carrying such heavy burdens,

No complaint pass your lips.

 

Embracing the nearness of you,

Emotions unfold.

Light you share,

In my darkest of hours.

 

I’m sorry for,

All the wrong things I have done.

Did I ever tell you,

I Love You!!!

 

Author's Note

I dedicated the song to my daughter Victoria, She is my butterfly! I love you and am so proud of you, no matter how high the mountain...you always reach the top!
I am so proud of who you have become Victoria!

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Now THAT'S worth a whole bunch of love points from mom. It's wonderful when our children reach the point where they can thank us for our efforts, maybe while minimizing our own weaknesses and mistakes. Conveying love and appreciation is the finest use of communication or poetry.

[eglantine]

agreed--I wrote my mom a poem as well

[Reeti]

mother's philanthropic and loving nature has been aggrandized upon very sweetly. the starting off with appreciation and adore until the end of the poem is very touching. this is nonetheless impressive in all aspects.

[Pax]

a wonderful and beautiful tribute to you both...honest and filled with love...

[Rhea752]

lovely and heartfelt. haha. i wish my mom would write a poem like that for me. well done. did you show your daughter... i am sure she loved/will love this poem. AMAZING!!

[emmajoy]

This is one of the most sincere and loving poems i've read in the Cafe. It's a wonderful tribute to both of you. This is love.

Great lyrics too.

[Marissa]

this is amazing and the song is perfect for the words and feeling in this poem...real true mother daughter love aw (:

[MOON]

Lovely tribute .

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So sweet and loving, may that loving bond between you both last forever :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Beautiful ...... :O)