Silence

 

Silence

It’s the one thing that does so much,

by doing nothing at all.

We sit and watch the time go by,

love ones we never call.

 

Its strength can be a double edge sword,

when it’s used right or wrong.

Sometimes its best, say nothing at all,

for words can be so strong.

 

The power of the tongue, unnoticed.

It can break bonds, setting free.

Its power should be one revered,

rooted like an oak tree.

 

Know it has the power to kill,

a love that once was strong.

Know it has the power to heal,

If you think hard and long.

 

Within it you can find wisdom

or it can break you down.

How will you choose to use this gift?

Create a smile or a frown?

 

The thought I know seems so simple,

choosing once not to speak.

 Understand the power of voice,

your mind it’s not so bleak.

 

There are something’s that have  power,

far beyond what we see.

Sometimes it’s good to just listen,

and set someone else free.

 

 

~Melody

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Reeti]

Melody, this is one of the best poems i've ever read here at Writer's Cafe. It denotes melodious and quite cryptic unraveling of the power of silence and its mortifying qualities. My mind returns to Ronan Keating's song "When you say nothing at all" and back to what your lovely poem says. However, you have assessed the prevalence of silence. Both the positive and negative points of silence has been portrayed here which evokes suspense and admiration. With the distinction between silence and uttering has been shown here subtly, i must say you've done a wonderful job!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled by your review.

[marytownsend]

Its very true, words can either heal or destroy, and how carelessly they are used sometimes! Silence can be a blessing sometimes, except when it goes on to long between loved ones. You've captured that delicate balancing act of life in your poem! Amazing writing!

[Aehr]

you seriously rock... I love this poem... I enjoyed it a lot!

[caroline]

I really like the imagery.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Sometimes it’s good to just listen,
and set someone else free."
Good music and amazing poetry. Good to have someone to have concern and love for us. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Enid Blake]

'know it has the power to heal...' - I particularly liked this verse.
Great poem, great wisdom within.

[L. Edward Neale]

Indeed well said! I couldn't agree more. This simple clear message of truth. The power of the tounge. Silence can speak volumes. What great peace is found from silence. Not having to say, not having to know. Ahh if only I had learned such lessons earlier in life. Better late than never.

[Yheela]

A very important topic, and you say it very well.

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Another picture of your powerful art! So very true...resoundingly true!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I know actions speak louder than words but still communication is essential in all relationships to keep them healthy and strong. A very wise poem.