We are nature

We are nature

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
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Please do not misunderstand when I say” foolishness.” It is simply said to stop the flow, in order to grasp my point, of what is to follow.

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NaturalNature

 

We stand in awe of the mountains,

the sea births serenity,

we honor the earth and what it bears,

look to it, to feel free.

 

Ah, foolishness! We miss the point.

It’s part of you and me.

From the nature is whence we came,

thus nature sets us free.

 

Lose not the point that pushes us,

that makes us crave this earth.

We are a part of all we crave,

Immerse yourself in worth.

 

Of the mountain peaks we are part,

of the sea so are we,

of evergreens and old oak trees,

earth's vessels walking free.

 

So surround yourself in nature,

the waters of your soul.

Submerse yourself, with who we are,

a part of nature,  whole.

 

~Melody

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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For we are a drop in the eternal ocean of energy, yet we are never alone in this world. We are all things and all things are part of our spirit. One can not live a part from the whole unless he is a splinter from the branch of the great tree of life without the knowledge of his origin.

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This makes me want to climb the mountains and drink hot tea with honey in it lol. Really gives that feeling of nature all around me as I am reading. Great picture!

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This is where man developed and where he belongs anywhere else would be miserable suicide

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I completely agree. The imagery in this piece was absolutely wonderful. It's sad that many people take nature for granted, or simply do not care. I wish they could read this, maybe it would bring them into understanding. Beautiful ^_^

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lovely poem....
a very beautiful description.....
so true :)

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Another beautiful piece! This poem speaks for itself, and really rings true. Humans, as a whole, ought to remember these words. Nice work!

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I hear the rhythm and the imagery sings like a mantra. Nice.

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This is absolutely beautiful. Breathtaking. I most certainly can hear the rhythm, which is perfect. Your words are inspiring, and make me want to go immerse myself in nature. You have captured its power and beauty in an amazing poem. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

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beauty.
ps-- had to snag that image for my desktop. :)

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Simply Amazing....

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Excellent poem. Your writing always impresses me. You have unique style all your own.

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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