Shhh, can you hear me?

Shhh, here the misty waters fall

They are calling your name

The birds also beckon and call

Asking of you the same

 

Come abide with me, rest your head

Restore your weary soul

Lavish in my earths cool soil deep

What once broken, now whole

 

Why am I left and forgotten

I hold healing for thee

You break me down, cut me away

All life once came from me

 

Shhh, can you hear me calling you

The wind guides you to me

Open your soul to understand

Embrace me and you’ll be free

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

To me, your poem expresses the beautiful gifts from our Creator. There are three distinct items mentioned here. One is the actual physical beauty of creation. Another is our ability to perceive and appreciate the waterfalls and forests. The third is the effect it has on us, to imbue a spirit of calm and peace. While the words of the poem are very descriptive, the pictures are even more so.

[emmajoy]

Beautiful words, beautiful music .. this is where to come when good thoughts touch love.

' Come abide with me, rest your head ~ Restore your weary soul ~ Lavish in my earths cool soil deep ~ What once broken, now whole '

[Rhea752]

nicely done. i liked the flow and word choice. keep writing!! :)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Amazing, such beauty and the music so suitable it refreshes my mind. I loved it the meaning is deep it signifies life and support when you are motivating