Shhh, can you hear me?

Shhh, here the misty waters fall

They are calling your name

The birds also beckon and call

Asking of you the same

 

Come abide with me, rest your head

Restore your weary soul

Lavish in my earths cool soil deep

What once broken, now whole

 

Why am I left and forgotten

I hold healing for thee

You break me down, cut me away

All life once came from me

 

Shhh, can you hear me calling you

The wind guides you to me

Open your soul to understand

Embrace me and you’ll be free

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

To me, your poem expresses the beautiful gifts from our Creator. There are three distinct items mentioned here. One is the actual physical beauty of creation. Another is our ability to perceive and appreciate the waterfalls and forests. The third is the effect it has on us, to imbue a spirit of calm and peace. While the words of the poem are very descriptive, the pictures are even more so.

[MOON]

This is a beautiful write on nature and like a prayer . The green of the photo has this healing quality that your words echo.

[Maan]

A very humble poem. :) Nicely written. There's an idea come to my mind after reading this that why is the sadness and loneliness and missing or losing someone is always so painful and you know full of agony? Sometimes there's a lot of joy and beautiful feelings penetrate in my skin when I take all with something positive, I don't know from that positive comes from. :), But when I think only my own self extracting out of all the world and people of it, out of every pain and as I said agony. It is hard to realize that something like this even exist but It.. it does. Here with us. Where calmness sing and peace flows in the air, in every particle you can feel. It might be hard to realise but it exists. Around us. . Here.. :) Beautiful poem MELODY and this awesome music boosted up the beauty of your poem. Keep writing and keep sharing. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I love your thought process!

[BlueDreams]

Breath taking piece regarding nature.. I enjoyed every word in it! :-)

[zainul]

"The birds also beckon and call"
The birds have magical power as the "the misty waters fall"
Each word organized in the verses has immense attraction.
Love the fabulous piece.

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This was so absolutely beautiful :) I love your peaceful, soulful, pen!

[Kat Loch]

Absolutely stunning. I feel as though I'm there and it's so entrancing. It's so amazing. :)

[†Tracey†]

I felt some of this power and healing when I got away the other day.. It makes me want to remember to take this time and breathe it all again every day..xo

[Renée]

Beautiful..I could smell the sweet air from the first verse..

[Skye]

Breathtaking....

[Brittany]

Oh now Melody. you are really hitting your stride. You keep producing amazing work. Well done. Well done. The visual/audio presentation as well is always so well done.