Shhh, can you hear me?

Shhh, here the misty waters fall

They are calling your name

The birds also beckon and call

Asking of you the same

 

Come abide with me, rest your head

Restore your weary soul

Lavish in my earths cool soil deep

What once broken, now whole

 

Why am I left and forgotten

I hold healing for thee

You break me down, cut me away

All life once came from me

 

Shhh, can you hear me calling you

The wind guides you to me

Open your soul to understand

Embrace me and you’ll be free

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

To me, your poem expresses the beautiful gifts from our Creator. There are three distinct items mentioned here. One is the actual physical beauty of creation. Another is our ability to perceive and appreciate the waterfalls and forests. The third is the effect it has on us, to imbue a spirit of calm and peace. While the words of the poem are very descriptive, the pictures are even more so.

[michael.c.m]

Beautiful piece. Simple and elegant.

[That_Girl]

Wonderfully done! The second stanza is aboslutely terrific and the last wraps it up so nicely. Lovely as always, Melody. :)

[Cole Hayley]

Another spellbinding piece from you, pardon the pun but the poem comes off like a melody.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to listen to nature. On a quiet day. Relax sound of water can bring peace to the desperate soul. I enjoyed the video and the peaceful words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mockingbird]

the imagery is vivid and serene. i could almost hear the sounds in my head. a great place for meditation. then something goes wrong somewhere. perhaps the idyllic setting helps to heal.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, I really like this stanza:
"Why am I left and forgotten

I hold healing for thee

You break me down, cut me away

All life once came from me"

[Winter]

This poem is really nice, it shows how natures beauty can free us from anything, like oproblems we are going through or anythhing, i love this poem thankyou

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I love to embrace a soul who saw gutter, and now light :) love you for it.

" All life once came from me " very beautiful strong soul! please keep on writing positivism like this...

Elisa Laura

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Always Elisa...always!

♥

[Lily Mae]

The answer is yes.. I do hear you :) xo

[darkness*star1985]

Amazing work, as always, you have a beautiful gift with writing, i hope to keep reading more of your work. .