Come Dream With Me

 

 

 

 

Against the stone I lay my head

The dreams brisk though my mind

Shapes and colors, oh so divine

Right here is where I shine

 

Blades of grass, a slight purple hue,

Silver clouds, peace inclined.

Trees that whisper and sing to me,

I am one of a kind.

 

I’ve dreamed of dark and shallow graves,

and flowers wince they came.

I’ve dreamed of shepherds gone astray,

the sheep are marred and lame.

 

I see the thunder strike the earth,

And start new life with in.

I’ve seen life; wasted, consumed,

about the mortal sin.

 

My dreams are simple and revered.

They see both sides of life.

I dream that you might dream with me,

And set aside your strife.

 

So come with me, lay down your head,

And set your cares aside.

Against the stone release your mind.

The ropes of life untied.

 

~Melody

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and strong words.
"My dreams are simple and revered.
They see both sides of life.
I dream that you might dream with me,
And set aside your strife."
A positive poem filled with beauty and hope. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MoriartyMesa]

The music and images take a distant second to the flow and working of the entire piece.

[Michael G.]

Beautiful poem, beautiful thoughts... beautiful pictures to go along with it.

[Rhea752]

two thumbs up!! :D

[afra]

beautiful .....good job and keep writing

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Melody, just as beautiful and inspiring as always :))

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You are faithfully so positive! Thank you for being who you are in read, in write, in life...a pure soul indeed!

[Brittany]

You have moved up a notch in your talent Melody. Whoo-hoo! This is a wonderfully crafted poem. I enjoyed it and the visual presentation very much. You're on your way to Master. Well done. Very well done.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You are always so very kind. I love this poem; I was exhausted and going to head to bead when I decided it was the best time to write the thoughts on my mind.

[Brittany]

Bravo. Hope you get sleepy and write again tonight.