Come Dream With Me

Come Dream With Me

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

 

 

 

 

Against the stone I lay my head

The dreams brisk though my mind

Shapes and colors, oh so divine

Right here is where I shine

 

Blades of grass, a slight purple hue,

Silver clouds, peace inclined.

Trees that whisper and sing to me,

I am one of a kind.

 

I’ve dreamed of dark and shallow graves,

and flowers wince they came.

I’ve dreamed of shepherds gone astray,

the sheep are marred and lame.

 

I see the thunder strike the earth,

And start new life with in.

I’ve seen life; wasted, consumed,

about the mortal sin.

 

My dreams are simple and revered.

They see both sides of life.

I dream that you might dream with me,

And set aside your strife.

 

So come with me, lay down your head,

And set your cares aside.

Against the stone release your mind.

The ropes of life untied.

 

~Melody

 

 

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© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Beautiful artwork and strong words.
"My dreams are simple and revered.
They see both sides of life.
I dream that you might dream with me,
And set aside your strife."
A positive poem filled with beauty and hope. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you Never stop to amaze me with each and every great piece you bring up and put up here, the pictures are beautiful and song suits the poem and the poem is amazing and beautiful.. I loved it.. so caring like a call from GOD!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and lovely to read. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh My GOD!!! I can't really tell you how much I enjoyed this! I am quite a dreamer myself... The pictures went along great with the poem... especially the one with the bed in it.. the imagery is gorgeous, the flow is completely amazing. and the content is STUNNINGLY BEAUTIFUL! Very inspirational and.. I give up! I really don't know how to praise it more...
JUST AMAZING. Thank you for sharing this one!

Definitely gotta shelve it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful and emotional. I love a poem and story in one that moves you and also makes you smile. Thank you for making me smile and feel warm inside, friend. Brilliant write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So peacefull and beautiful, plus awesome images and smooooothe rhyming.. i love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love how this is put together....musical accompaniment adds to that dreamy nice feeling :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So well written, dreamlike photo's enhance words so beautifully.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is pure, sensational art with the mystifying words as a whole, the scintillating photos, the captivating, and uplifting music. The whole presentation of your work is in concord. What's more is how the narrator is playing the role of a philosophical savant guiding the reader into achieving complete solace. I've always been in favor of this concept. despite speaking of the nightmares, there is a burgeoning impression created of allowing the other person to attain nirvana. I really love your verse.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

I am always humbled, when words as your are spoken.
I love the pictures they vividfy the emotion of this poem, a very good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh yes.. well done.. a nice little rhyme..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2012
Last Updated on August 23, 2012
Tags: dream, Love, pain, health, ageing, grace, life, abuse, poetry, wisdom, knowlage, nature, understanding, family, purity, soul, unity, equality

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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