Let it be

 

What does it mean to free one’s mind?

To truly let it go,

no more burdens, thoughts unclear,

finally free to grow.

How we limit ourselves, our minds

With guilt, worry and fear.

Here’s a tangible solution,

the answer is quite clear.

Now open the doors to your mind

and let it just run free.

At first it will run oh so wild,

relax and let it be.

As time runs on, it will run down

and rest contentedly

A mind is like a beast of sorts,

it truly must be free

So sit back and relax my friend.

Just try and let it be.

Understanding comes from trying.

Trust me, you wait and see.

 

~Melody

 

 

Reviews

[rivers]

Most excellent thoughts, Melody..Finding freedom can be complex because it is not always as it seems. Don't wish to taint the positiveness of an inspirational message in your fine poem. as your words say it all...Thanks for a great read to start my day...

[Leigh]

Your words represent the desire to reach a great feeling and higher state of mind

[quinfinn]

sometimes it is not so easy to free the mind as one may perceive, but your words are encouraging and nicely penned, almost as convincing as a mantra...very nicely executed and cleverly conceived.

[Poetic Beauty]

The idea of relaxing the mind and letting things simply flow makes life a little easier. The flow in this piece and the wording is relaxed and smooth.

[MoriartyMesa]

Enjoyed the flowing and wording, also like the music in the background

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful...excellent job...

[VelvetRosetta]

I so need to free my mind I love the thought of it being a wild beast...everything wild on instinct deserves to be free. Very well done!

[MandaBear]

Most excellent thoughts, Melody.

[Enigma]

Splendid. Minds lie dormant, chained with fear and worries. if only one can find the courage to free it from all its fetters, the mind can finally attempt to realize its true potential. Its tempting to think what all one will be able to do then. Well penned. :)

[Wild Willow Blue]

Nicely done.

[Lina Grey]

I love this. It's left me speechless, but I love it. Thank you.