A magical World

Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

Reviews

[zainul]

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled...

[Allie]

This is crazy because I was just thinking about something like this earlier. I was thinking that I need to try to find the beauty in my own life, instead of finding the beauty on the other side of things. Thanks for the great write, it is truly magnificent.

[seaNobody]

charmed with beauty and a way of getting back to some quiet place of meditation-- free from some of the usual moments of struggle that make it all so hard sometimes!

[Legolas]

Great job! I love the imagery! In the first line it is "where" not "were"

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you...dang that was fast! lol just put this on here;). I fixed that, thank you :)

[Legolas]

haha-im a ninja;)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

:0 yes yes you are! ;)

[Legolas]

Haha told you;)