A magical World

Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

Reviews

[zainul]

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled...

[Dez H.]

Now this is the s**t. I smoked my magical herb, then i went to your magical world and you added the music! I was there. I love this. Whenever i need to escape this will be the place i will go. Thank you for opening this door to me. I'm officially a fan. Good s**t ms lady.

[olla]

nicely done..

[w]

Nice piece. One typo in the last line (I think): were should be where. You have described a nice landscape with good visuals.

[Legolas]

I see youve done some editing. Looks good:)

[Pencrafter]

Your poem has a wonderful, positive feel about it. Not only do you observe the beauty in nature, excellently reflected in the visuals, but you also fit the person into it, searching for a comfortable place. Also, I like the way you mention the wisdom found in nature. With only a modest amount of effort we can recognize the love within our Creator, displayed by his works.

[Leigh]

This is a beautiful piece containing such positivity

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was a very good poem. Reminds me of "stairway to heaven" led Zeppelin. I loved this. Uh mind me asking. What's the video? I'm on a phone and it won't let me watch it so just curious. But really Great poem.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am at work and also unable to see as that part is blocked:( will get back to you on that;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

OK Thanks it's appreciated if it's related to the poem.

[Harley (arbiter)]

But it's not blocked it's not loading. Mobile site is weird

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

It's a meditation piece, Reiki-Mind Body Soul

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah I'll look it up on YouTube. Also I have a mp3 called "lotus: Gilbert Gabriel" that's a relaxing tune. Thanks

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Any time. :)

[Ruth]

So beautiful! I enjoyed the whole journey of this...hopes and wishes, equality and divinity ever present...what a piece! xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and positive words. The world can be a beautiful place. Need to find better ways then war and hate. A big world. Enough room for all people.
"Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.
My new dream is of one, were we are treating it with pride."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rhea752]

lovely. the imagery was vivid. the word choice was amazing. the poetry you write is exquisite and i enjoy reading it. :)