A magical World

Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

Reviews

[zainul]

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled...

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of someone who has experience.death seen otherside amd has come back dor it wasn't their time

[Sean]

Excellent poem! I think the delivery was very well done. I could envision all that you wrote, and I have similar sentiments about the relationship between the world and the existence that is me.

[That_Girl]

What a lovely poem. Elegant and beautiful. Well done.

[~LadyWolf~]

Beautiful poem :) I love the ending!

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Melody! What a perfect name for such a beautiful poet :) You touch me deeply with your grace...blessings

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

you are always so very kind, thank you!

[darkness*star1985]

I love this, can i go right now to your Magical world, i can't tell you how much i really enjoyed this peom. Thank your for sharing this.

[marytownsend]

This is beautifully done, a true work of art celebrating the wonder of nature and the wish to treat it kindly!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Amazing...the photos and video go well this....

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

A wonderful piece which keeps the reader back to reality, and to let go of the unreal dream.
So utterly beautiful and well spoken dear. Your mind is full of love, and yes that ending, pride. :)

E.L.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You humble me, thank you!

I love to do that ;) because it's just the truth, as you learned me that :) xoxoxo

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

;)

:)

[Cole Hayley]

another beautiful spellbinding piece Melody. You never cease to amaze.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

You are so kind!