A magical World

Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

Reviews

[zainul]

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled...

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

BEAUTIFUL!!!! I love the imagery here. I also love that you always write with a purpose.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you, very kind words

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

your welcome, just speaking the truth

[Racy Daniel]

You can't finish expressing your feeling saying about the world because It is amazing.
Good job.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

perfection, its a worldi would gladly go to!

[JanieB]

Great poem. Love the last stanza. Bravo.

[stars are far]

That's cool..

[†Tracey†]

So peaceful.. first the photos catch my eye then the your words flow with the magic...x

[Richy Moon]

Beautiful poem! It rhymes and chimes on its own and has a perfect flow!
I love it, keep on writing Melody!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovely scenes were in my head as i read this poem!

nice work

[bob, small b. aka invs]

what a beautiful, pleasant, hopeful poem. nice to find. makes me want to take a walk in the woods.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Very nice . Great write. With regards.