A magical World

Under the oak tree, where my mind glides far from me.

I envision a world, pure of heart but not mistake free.

I see all the colors magnificently swirl and blend.

It beckons me to let go of this world I live in.

 

I gesture a nod of understanding and grace.

I cannot stay, in this wonderfully crafted place.

I must travel home through my minds worn roads.

Open my eyes, to see the beauty my world holds.

 

I see the birds as they fly in graceful silhouettes

They are free of burdens, they have no regrets.

The flowers bloom magically, without being told.

Within my surroundings, I see the wisdom it holds.

 

I shall bloom like the flower, exposing beauty within.

Fly like the bird, carefree not fearing a tail spin.

Our world holds so much wonder and magic inside.

My new dream is of one, where we are treating it with pride.

Reviews

[zainul]

Melody,you are magical craft person of a fabulous place in our world.
Your melodious flow of words arrested my power of movement for sometime.
You are a great angel belonging to our world who can create so much wonder and magic in this mundane place.
Congratulations!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled...

[MandaBear]

fabulous and Beautiful!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Wow, what a beautiful image of nature you've shown us ! Also, admirable the message you hold in the very last verse. Technically speaking I enjoyed the use of quatrains, it's very cool. Great job =D

[kingblaq]

I love the beauty in this piece. I actually smelt dews on green grass

[Kaela]

Relaxing, true and eye-opening. Beautiful!

[Tunder]

Once again, a beautiful poem! I agree that we ought to really look at our own world and find beauty and happiness in it, because it is a wonderful, exquisite place!

[Riley]

Awesome poem!!!! I need to reflect on all the beauty within this world instead of wishing I lived in a magical land like you see in movies! Thanks for pointing out the beauty in this world!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very pretty. I can see this place in my head; a vibrant picture painted by your words. Great work.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

such beautiful place.. the pictures goes well with it!! I would love to live in a place like this

[caroline]

I love the imagery in this poem as well as the pictures that go with it. I like how it describes a wonderful place that exists.