F**k Thursday

F**k Thursday

A Poem by Dunlack
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Venting

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Damn...Why am I up so early?? Mad at the world only because it owes me something…what? Maybe heaven knows. I thought about what momma told me, "Try to get up and read a verse or two". I did...Then I discovered my vision is going bad…

 

Just another reason to grab the closes person to me and never let go…by the neck that is. How sweet. I must lack a great deal of sanity due to my belief of one horrible feeling after another is just a blessing in disguise…

 

Keeping me humble, yet creating a monster. Something like Quasimodo. Except I refuse to run to the top of the Cathedral and hide. If you try to break me, I guarantee you will have better luck conceiving your first child behind the city dump. How is that for a honeymoon?

 

Random thought but damn pops got on that pipe and left in spirit man!! Forcing me to channel my twisted thoughts on page with my left hand. Never mind my high volume of ignorance during this current hour. Just venting, something my soul made clear that is well over due…As well as my debt to society.

 

I will not pay up until the world gives me WHAT IS MINE!! Therefore I can care less, leaving today impregnated…Never to return…At this time, I am in the number with one those nappy headed no good n****s...Yeah I said it...F**k Thursday. Take a troubled man that has great potential followed up with a bad nights rest, this is what you get...Mixed feelings...Confused thoughts...How much longer can I endure...

 

© 2012 Dunlack


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This is really quite powerful and amusing. The way you progressivly get more annoied, delving into crazy in the middle. It's rather an interesting piece, and I like it. I'm questioning whether it would work better not in a block... but i'm not so sure. It might be better like this in rant form.

Madness is the only way to stay sane :P Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice work. I feel you here, Sir E.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dunlack
Dunlack

Chicago, IL



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I'm a young writer from the city of Charlotte, NC with the ambitions of being known world wide for my work. I'm a Graduate of Gardner-Webb University, and will be furthering my education at DePaul Uni.. more..

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