Farewell ~Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Farewell ~Bhuyanshi Talukdar

A Poem by Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Pastel yellow skies
and the branches of grey trees
tainted with regrets.
Birds hum a somber tune
as if a requiem for what's gone.
Streetlights flicker shutters
the emptiness
Concave clouds stays still
with our goodbyes:(

© 2023 Bhuyanshi Talukdar


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The belief that the goodbye impacts even the forces of nature defines the enormity of the love and emphasizes the sadness. Well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


beautiful images, though a somber tune...you portray emptiness well, with Concave clouds" and the regret of branches.... is this the end of the world? or a fleeting emotion?
LOVELY
Warmly, B

Posted 10 Months Ago


Absolutely beautifully written

Posted 10 Months Ago


Multiple images combine like a puzzle to bring about a great picture and message.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on December 27, 2023
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