Crystal Sky ~ Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Like puck's mischievous murmurs,
the sweet anticipation of
something extraordinary!
Time seemed to pause,
Painting stories
on a stretched taut...
Pearl whispers unseen--but felt.

Drips like honey hues
In the heart of
where we all belong;
a soft reply in the
necklace of conversations.
Soft and shy,
Gentle luminous touch
In the blue fragrant
mountains silences us.

Lustrous shawl stirs the heart;
a spell is cast--where hearts can fly.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

A beautiful love poem, soft words circle around and weave in and out of this love tryst..." gentle luminous touch"....when one is in love, time does seem to pause....I really enjoyed reading this, sort of mesmerizing...Thanks for sharing...
Warmly, B

[Neville]

I am so glad I opened this page .. my finger tip must have known something well worth visiting lay just a gentle push away .. very much enjoyed .. Neville

[Anastasia]

Oh how nice to read this one! Sweetie pie poem.

[Vol]

B. T.,
what a refreshing love poem! Like cool water for the ear, so smooth I hardly ever read a poem on here that sounds as good as what it says... nice word choices, imagery, and unique approach to a very common theme is impressive!
Vol

[Andrew John]

Yes, so many things can stir the heart. Nice poem, this, Bhuyanshi.

[Writergurl]

This is a wonderful write here, enjoyed