Who stole my first kiss?~ Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Marry, 'neath the moon's soft glow,
a vampire hath swiped my first kiss
His charm, like stars, doth enchant.

His eyes, like burning embers,
Piercing through the darkness deep
His touch, cold and electrifying
Sends shivers down my spine.

His fangs grazed my neck,
temptation growing stronger
adding to the dizzying moment.

Sensations danced
upon my skin,
electricity coursed
through my veins,
In the depths of darkness
our desires intertwined
lost in the vampire's spell.

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

Wooooow such a different and fantastic poem this is, really...I need to catch my breath!!! Your readers are definitely feeling in their all senss each and every word...hard not to be right there in it!

A big well done from me dear :-)))