Our little spitz ~Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Our little spitz ~Bhuyanshi Talukdar

A Poem by Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Woof woof,
I'm a flower sniffer,
My wet nose twitches,
what a differ!

I chase bumblebees,
and petals too,
Sweet stems meet their doom,
it's true.

My eyes gleam,
fierce and curious,
A defender,
faithful and never furious.

My heart is pure,
a natural connector,
But strangers beware,
I'm not a protector.

I may bite,
but I'm easy to tame,
With a wagging tail
and playful game.

I love yogurt,
melons and capons,
A feast for my senses,
I can't help but fawn.

But when I see my
master coming home,
My heart races,
I can't help but roam.

I jump and bark,
my tail wags with glee,
My excitement soars,
I'm as happy as can be!

I'm your sunshine in the morning,
your warmth in the cold,
A little ninja,
fierce and never to be told.

I'll steal your socks,
and your heart too,
A little rascal, but im so cute!

© 2023 Bhuyanshi Talukdar


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"I'm your sunshine in the morning, your warmth in the cold." Beautiful lines to describe the relationship between loyal, faithful dog and their owner. I work at an animal shelter, and I truly love all the dogs and cats we have there. I also write songs and poetry for my cats. It's my homage to the demanding little dictator. Your spitz is very lucky to have you for an owner!

Posted 1 Year Ago


“I'm your sunshine in the morning,
your warmth in the cold,
A little ninja,
fierce and never to be told. “
I absolutely love this poem! Your imagery is so on-point and playful. Great flow, form and rhyme. We can see the little dog and hear its thoughts. Lovely, loving write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


You seem very fond of your dog. More people should adopt dogs. Very good

Posted 1 Year Ago


How charming. Dogs are such fun. Little spitz is fantastic.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a charming tribute to a beloved dog. The first stanza made me think of walking my little terrier on a trail by a river in Washington while he stopped to sniff flowers.

Posted 1 Year Ago



Hello my friend, I doubt if anyone who visits these words could possibly leave here without a smile fixed to their face .. Muchly enjoyed .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


I've got two of these as well. But I seldom see such accurate and pleasing descriptions.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on August 21, 2023
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