Hands Underwater ~ Bhuyanshi Talukdar

Dip your hands into the water,
The moment freedom awakens
breaking free from constraints.

As you untangle,
senses sharpen,
Experience the beauty
of unfettered sensations.

In the quiet depths,
a world unknown to many
Schools of koi swim alongside you
Feel the gentle touch of the water
Melt into its flow,
in a moment of unrestricted dance.

This is the freedom I feel,
Breaking free from constraints
exploring new realms.

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

lovely poem Bhuyanshi. deep in wisdom and ... a stirring reminder to me of a memory of a time when i once swam in a pool of koi.

[Lorry]

No matter who we are, we could all do with a little more freedom in our lives, especially after lockdown interrupted our usual flow, if you'll pardon the pun, but this has such an appeal to it that I shall be on the lookout for a pond on my travels, to test out if the calmness of thinking about it matches the actions.
I'll let you know how it goes, but I think you already know 😊
Exceptional write, calm and reflective words.

[ProphetsMother]

Ahh this is a good feeling makes me think of a past life as a mermaid. Water is purity. Beautiful.