"Hiding Spaces"

"Hiding Spaces"

A Poem by mlundstedt

I find you in all kinds of places,
Cozy, little, hiding spaces.
Cornered with your little schemes--
Mischief (one of many themes).
Huddled just behind the door--
And only you can say what for.
Under beds, half awake--
Giggling on a daydream break.
Crouched inside your quiet nook--
Lost in pages of a book.
Each spot is chosen well,
But they all have a little tell.
And once found, you seem surprised,
That your secret has been compromised!

© 2015 mlundstedt


Author's Note

mlundstedt
My daughter hides beautifully.

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This poem was a nice read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


mlundstedt

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Words chosen well, innocent, cunning and naive all at the same time.
I had a vivid picture of how i would hide and sneak as a child and how it felt to be a solo covert.

I enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mlundstedt

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the beauty photo and the tale. Our children allow us to see their actions and allow us to write down their adventures and thoughts. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mlundstedt

9 Years Ago

Thank you! She inspires much of my writing.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. She should. I have my three grand-boys. They give me hope.

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Added on March 2, 2015
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Tags: child; toddler; girl; young; you