Into the Ocean Deep

Blue-green sunrise
desperation within
Limbs cut the clarity that claims life
My life!
And it is only because of you...
Afraid to sink
deep blue sky is blurry
circulation ceased but pain remains
In my heart and I give in!
And it is only because of you...
Last lifeline has been thrown
passion is lost in ice cold water
My sanity smiles back at my reflection
And it is all because of you...
Lost in you...
I lost myself when I loved you!

Reviews

[Leah Maldonado]

I like this, its interesting. they way you wrote it seemed to convey the emotion of panicked joy? it was very interesting...(i repeated myself, i know)

[MelLo]

It's a deep introspect about ending it all into the ocean deep all because of a lost love. Dark times calls for dark writing...based on song