Bitter

Bitter

A Poem by Mai L Nissen

Lemony bitter

Sugar to silence the hurt

Bitter Lemonade


28th of August 2015

© 2015 Mai L Nissen


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absorbing the sugar of life doesn't necessarily get rid of the pain...makes it less bitter as a quick fix...but that bitter lemonade taste finds its way back.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mai L Nissen

9 Years Ago

exactly! Thank you for sharing your thoughts :)
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

enjoy your writings, Mai....

when you have some spare time, visit my page if you have.. read more
Mai L Nissen

9 Years Ago

Will do! I like your writings :)
You said a handful in the short poem. When sweetness turn sour. Hard to find the sweet taste of hope. Thank you Mai for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mai L Nissen

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! I am quite amazed at how you manage to read and review so many things.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Hard to do. Writing and reading is my last pleasure and you are welcome.

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 Added on August 28, 2015
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Tags: #bitter, #hurt, #silence, #poem, #poetry, #senryu

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Mai L Nissen
Mai L Nissen

Odense, Region Syddanmark, Denmark



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