I am reading and diving inside your words. Feel that burning flames feel that hopes. Feel that all. Like all what you create. I know from my personal life. It s great find something like this thanks
Your writing trills and tempers in near alternate worded thoughts. You use fine phrasing, '.. Yearning in deep dwelling -- puncture through -- paralysed mime in motion, -- with deafening silence -- in a world shaken.'
There's a distinct sense of time past, of mood and need, of fear and passion. But then, as the pace increases - albeit quite subtly, the present is clearer but gradually more forgettable. And, the future is re-emerging into a strong, radiant reality.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Emma. Niece of you to take the time to read and comment, thank you for sharing your take .. read moreThank you, Emma. Niece of you to take the time to read and comment, thank you for sharing your take on the poem :) It did not think about it, when I wrote it, but the feelings that stirred when writing, can actually be summed up quite nicely by your comments :)
9 Years Ago
I so often get things wrong, but then, if three people look at a cloud, the eyes see different creat.. read moreI so often get things wrong, but then, if three people look at a cloud, the eyes see different creatures emerging!
I enjoyed the poem dear Poet.
"Moon’s smile fades away;
Night’s glistening eyes
sleepily extinguish,
on the soft screen
of cloudy skies."
The description create thoughts and visions. I like the poetry that take you to new places and leave you with thoughts. This poem did. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad that the poem spoke to you :)
I am 30 years old, a graduate student from Denmark, studying English (literature, history, linguistics) and Scientific Study of Religion.
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