Independently we do what we please, so long as our bubbles remain intact. Once we reach outside it, that very bubble will cease to be. The advantage of the bubble is that we are safe from outside interventions on our mind and actions. However, that may be the very disadvantage. Without the bubble we leave ourselves open to new experiences and perspectives. And only then do we realize (and perhaps see) the bubbles of others and recognize that our own bubble has gone missing.
An interesting piece that upon multiple reads, still drum up thoughts and questions to inquisitive minds. Thanks for sharing this and I hope that I will get some stuff written to share with you as well! - James
There are things that you read, reread and keep reading because every time you do so, you find new meaning in words and that's what make this poem special.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review, Mayank! I appreciate you reading it - and rereading it :)
Metaphysically empowering, quiddity of life is the essence confined inside our own bubble, deep thinking from a deep poem. Thank you for posting this, it is spectacular.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Bear. I appreciate your kind review - and also the suggestions you sent me! Still have no.. read moreThank you, Bear. I appreciate your kind review - and also the suggestions you sent me! Still have not had the time to make up my mind - regardless I am thankful :)
'The space, - confined within the bubble, - seamlessly merges with outer emptiness;.. '
Glorious ever-present space empties and fills at will, but we mini mortals just walk blindly thought it, treading carelessly, rarely looking forward or back. And at times are near to bursting that bubble.
We waste its mystery, its gift. Sad. Your writing is worth far more than a narrow box..
Thank you, Emma. For reading and commenting! I appreciate it :)
9 Years Ago
Smiling as i add an 'oops'. Meant to type 'through' not thought' . Will now go sit on the naughty st.. read moreSmiling as i add an 'oops'. Meant to type 'through' not thought' . Will now go sit on the naughty step. :)
As always this is again a thought provoking piece of work. Its so good to read your work again :) How have you been??
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Nazia! Been really busy, too stressed out and fatigued to be active in here for a while, .. read moreThank you, Nazia! Been really busy, too stressed out and fatigued to be active in here for a while, however, it is nice being in here again :) How have you been?
Busy with a project that is bound to fail :p lol
Its been days since I last wrote.. Still its.. read moreBusy with a project that is bound to fail :p lol
Its been days since I last wrote.. Still its good to read and absorb something new :)
9 Years Ago
Haven't really been writing for months... except editing the 3 poems from March. Well, if your proje.. read moreHaven't really been writing for months... except editing the 3 poems from March. Well, if your project is related to writing, you usually come through quite on top :)
9 Years Ago
Thanks :)... I hope the project coordinator thinks the same way. :D
"The space,
confined within
the bubble,
seamlessly
merges with
outer emptiness.."
I know this void..It's exactly the same thing slowly killing me...eating every ounch of my flesh!
Creatively written! 😊
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and commenting! It is much appreciated :)
I really enjoyed this piece, the title is perfect for what you are
touching on, I can definitely identify with the message, thanks for
sharing and b-blessed!
The world seem colder to me. Rare deep and true conversations.
"In this space, we live
unable to touch
or see the heart
of another."
The above lines were my favorite. They could stand alone. We can be ghost with-in a work place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I am 30 years old, a graduate student from Denmark, studying English (literature, history, linguistics) and Scientific Study of Religion.
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