A poem about individuality, identity through consumerism... a play on the strategy used by Microsoft: Embrace, Extend, Extinguish
‘Individuality’: The demand of masses for individual freedom, accommodated,
embraced by the system to appease the crowd. Slowly appropriated to fit existing structure; the demands
for individual freedom guided down acceptable paths, ... losing all meaning
The conceptextended to align with
Capitalist interests: Where companies dictate willing individuals how to be an individual; transforming
individuality into a brand, a commodity, we happily buy into. Uniqueness celebrated, consumed without thought by the many people, the individuals, who dare defy mediocrity of a crowd.
Busy being
individuals, absent-minded
no one notices, the mediocrity of crowds of individuals
travelling along parallel paths; The paths that feeds, not the victory of individuality, but the purses of companies; Companies
that shape and sell a selection
of identities; a selection of paths to meet the demands
of the crowd
of individuality; to maintain the cycle of controlled freedom,
profit and customer satisfaction. Determined we walk, in all our glorious
individuality, towards the city’s cul-de-sac’s; Where all individuality isextinguished.
(Old news, I know, but we still do it...) Mai L. Nissen, 24th of February 2015
A poem about individuality, identity through consumerism - a play on the strategy used by Microsoft:
Embrace: Development of software substantially compatible with a competing product, or implementing a public standard.
Extend: Addition and promotion of features not supported by the competing product or part of the standard, creating interoperability problems for customers who try to use the 'simple' standard.
Extinguish: When extensions become a de facto standard because of their dominant market share, they marginalize competitors that do not or cannot support the new extensions.
Any constructive criticism and suggestions are well received.
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Easy to be controlled. Hard to walk a lonely path. The poem open the door to a wide open topic. Government want a uneducated people who follow the rules. They are afraid of a utopia of free minds and thinkers. If you kill off the need for self-thinking. What are we?
'Where all individuality
is extinguished."
What did we become? Just cattle walking to the slaughter house. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review! It is much appreciated... I can hear that you can relate :)
I have to agree with you here. Put simply, it's all about money and demographics. Even the pizzaria has something to do with it if you think about it. The norm is utilized to make a profit. Good poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yes, though not just the norm. Even those who try to swim against the current often become a part of.. read moreYes, though not just the norm. Even those who try to swim against the current often become a part of it, as new market strategies are created all the time to target the people with alternative views... No matter what, we are all caught up in this cycle. It's kind of sad...
Easy to be controlled. Hard to walk a lonely path. The poem open the door to a wide open topic. Government want a uneducated people who follow the rules. They are afraid of a utopia of free minds and thinkers. If you kill off the need for self-thinking. What are we?
'Where all individuality
is extinguished."
What did we become? Just cattle walking to the slaughter house. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review! It is much appreciated... I can hear that you can relate :)
Stunning piece of work and a truth, the bigger sharks will not allow small fishes to live. This happens everywhere the so called growth is only connected with creating monopoly. Well written and conceived. Great work
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review! It is much appreciated :)
Thank you for sharing your truthful and enlightening message :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Satan (that feels a bit strange writing that :)) Thank you for taking the time to read an.. read moreThank you, Satan (that feels a bit strange writing that :)) Thank you for taking the time to read and comment :)
First of all I would applaud the choice of the topic.. it may be an old news but its also an ignored news and its great that someone is taking heed. Individuality as I feel is very important to a person but as long as it is not causing any harm or shutting you down completely from the world. Being busy and minding one's own business is a bit of the demand of the time but yes it should never come in the way of greater good. We were given intellect simply so that we would never follow things blindly be it anything..
thanks for sharing the work.. great job :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to read it and share your thoughts, Nazia. I am glad that other people.. read moreThank you for taking the time to read it and share your thoughts, Nazia. I am glad that other people can see the problem in blindly following others. Your comments are much appreciated :)
Well I could go on for days about this but I won't, as you know this world is
big business that worships money, so to anyone with half a brain knows that
businesses will do whatever it takes to pocket that mighty
dollar, even if that means selling there souls, lying, cheating, or stealing!
If they spot a weakness in certain type of individuals it's game on! This is
so well written friend, thanks for sharing and b-blessed
Thank you for reading it, Jamestown! I am glad you liked it :)
Do you go by anything else th.. read moreThank you for reading it, Jamestown! I am glad you liked it :)
Do you go by anything else then 'Jamestown' in here?
9 Years Ago
Your welcome, and JT if that's easier, lol
9 Years Ago
Haha... It's not that I cannot be bothered to write Jamestown, it just seem strange to address someo.. read moreHaha... It's not that I cannot be bothered to write Jamestown, it just seem strange to address someone like that. So JT it is :)
I don' think there's a thing wrong with this Mai. It is an astute and well executed observational piece which I really enjoyed reading from start to finish. I agree completely that any sparx of individuality are quickly either doused or made into a world-wide contained conflagration that has the same effect - makes it cool for a day or two then totally 'un-cool' whatever that is - to even mention the original.
Its a huge conveyor belt and Im kind of minded of the war on drugs argument - without users there would be no dealers - you know what I mean? We could go round and round on that kind of merry-go-round with individuality too.
This is really really good.
Thanks for posting this Mai. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful review, Anto.
Yes, you are right - this also applies to other a.. read moreThank you for your wonderful review, Anto.
Yes, you are right - this also applies to other areas such as the war on drugs, as you mention. Individuals, as we like to call ourselves, are so willing to just follow... Oh, the irony...
Your thoughts are much appreciated!
- Mai
I haven't studied much on this topic.But i must say i am well aware of the companies who very slyly persuade the willing distracted individuals.Your poem nakes us aware that in the futile search of individuality we are drowning in our own ignorance.These companies are greedy wolves in coats of sherp.If only the crowd had enough brains to perceive the cunningness of it all.Tank you so much for bringing into light this topic.It boosted me up to know more about this subject :)
~Sophy
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Sophy. I am really glad you liked it! Your reviews are always appreciated :) I have diffi.. read moreThank you, Sophy. I am really glad you liked it! Your reviews are always appreciated :) I have difficulty keeping up with people's writing, but feel free to send me a read request know and then...
- Mai
9 Years Ago
It was a pleasure.. but hey i don't send RRs or receive them.I read what my heart wants and i apprec.. read moreIt was a pleasure.. but hey i don't send RRs or receive them.I read what my heart wants and i appreciate when people drop by my page by their freewill :) thank you
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