Mixed emotions

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the words I spoke 

forgotten to paranoia after this toke

tied to ethanol soaked rope

dope sick 

cried cause I can't cope 

haze too thick

bitter taste of soap

reminds me im in to deep

dont wake me from my  sleep

I know death creeps 

one second your eyes are open

next you chokin

out of breaths to take is what it cloakin

fake it aint

the truth no saint can say

the heart beats away

its last drum note

hopefully in this life you died a goat

or owned all the b*****s and a milly dollar boat

cold it getting so tie those stiches closer

judgment of ego

fall apart as you get grosser

food for seagulls on silver coasters

I'm no boaster of truth

you see yourself and speed off in the coup

fastest way to spitting lies in the booth

so remember before the casket closes judgement comes wearing a suit

Reviews

[R E Tree]

I’m glad to be the first to review this. I’ve noticed a few rhymes here and there. This is so cleverly written. More than just the average poem.

Some strong imagery at play. You’re definitely speaking your mind with this one. I find it insightful and I like your expression through out. This poem speaks masculine energy. I admire it. Excellent writing. Careful planning is in the making of this.