It Judges

It Judges

A Story by midnight reaper

It is cloaked in a black robe belching fire from its mouth. It towers over me by meters. As it breathes out a strong wind hits me nearly blowing me away as the sound echoes through the stone chamber. It asks "What has led you to this barren place beyond space and time? What is it that you seek? Is it judgment?" I shiver and crumble to my knees not being able to move. Its words tear at me like iron claws and its godly presence presses on my shoulders like a thousand earths. It feels as if it already knows my very words and already probing my mind for what I don't know. After what seemed as an eternity of silence it spoke "Ah you seek judgment. So be it." He knew. I didn't have time to even take a breath, it was done, I was judged. Floating in emptiness, I can't scream. I was left to myself slowly being eaten by my own mind. The pain cannot be described. The silence is deafening  

© 2018 midnight reaper


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Are you describing the afterlife? Love the detail in your paragraph :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


midnight reaper

6 Years Ago

Yeah and thank you so much!

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Added on August 29, 2018
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