I Love You

The promise of what you see

But I know

That you are there

And I know I should tell

You one dear thing

That I love you

 

It keeps me going

When you’re gone

It keeps me safe

At night alone

Knowing that you

Are safe at home

 

The promise of what you see

But I know

That you are there

And I know I should tell

You one dear thing

That I love you

 

 

And all that happens

From now til then

Know that I am always with you

Know that I will never leave

For you are all that I am

And all I ever wish to be

Closed in your arms

With you safe with me

Author's Note

Constructive criticism and positive comments please!

Reviews

[Daniel Gardner]

I like this poem, it gives some great views on how one can feel. Very relate able. I think in my opinion anyway that If you were to add "me" To the part that says:
It keeps safe
Other then that great job.