Is it weird?

Is it weird

To love someone

And them barely know you exist

Is it weird

To want to be with someone

Who is thousands of miles away

Is it weird

To know that they are not

So into you

Is it weird

To think they are the greatest person alive

Is it weird

That they love their religion

And you not even know what yours is

Is it weird

That you think about them

Every time you wake up and every time you fall asleep

Is it weird

That you know that it could never work

But it doesn’t stop you from hoping it could

Is it weird

To hope and pray you could believe in something

Just for them

Is it weird

That I want this person to know

But can’t think of how to tell them

Is it weird

That the thing that scares me most

Is losing them

Is it weird

That I wait up every night

Just to see if there is a chance I could talk to them

Is it weird

That my brain is producing this

Without me even realizing what is written

Is it weird

That it kills me to write this

Author's Note

Just want opinions, and please, keep it constructive.

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

this is interresting. So firstly i would just like to say that reading a poem structured this way is really anoying to me. because there are no line breaks. I liked the poem though and understand why it is structured this way..but if i were you i would take another look at it. Also just a thought, the poem doesn't feel complete to me, i would put a last "is it weird" at the end of the poem..it leaves you with a little something and i think would end the poem perfectly. but thats just my opinion..feel free to ignore =)