The Heavens Tonight

The Heavens Tonight

A Poem by Queen Jummarrium

Moonlight shimmers on the water

star-shine twinkles overhead

I look up towards the heavens tonight

mars is bright and jupiter cold

against the pitch black back drop

there's not a cloud in the sky to ruin this night

the smell of warm salt from the ocean

fills my nostrils and surrounds my heart

I smile and laugh inside my head

for I am happy once again

 

© 2009 Queen Jummarrium


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I love the imagery in this poem. It quickens the senses with vivid description. This was agood piece. I enjoyed all of the pleasant descriptions, especially the one about the scent of salt from the ocean filling nostrils and surrounding the heart. Good work and God bless. Thanks for your review of my poetry!

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A beautiful image of nature, well written.

You convey such an image in such a short piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Congrats on your winning poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


very serene, tranqil, and filled with beauty. very nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice! Nature is so nice. Pity most of the world is filled with other, unnatural things...

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Firstly I love the structure! It looks so good on the page.

I agree with what you say, living so close to nature and particulary the sea its easy at times to shrug off your worries (if only for the moment) and just be in awe of everything around you. I think more people would be alot happier if they just stopped and appreciated a beauty which surrounds.

Great write, thanks for sharing :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is so heartfelt
And it is great to see how you can smile in the darkness
It shows that you are indeed fearless out under this moon light because that's what makes you so happy
Nice write!
- Kavish

Posted 15 Years Ago


i really like this poem! it shows strong imagery and sort of painted a picture in my head. i love your poem...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oooo... reminds me of one of my favorite songs, Moonlight Sonata. This is an amazing poem, it's pretty.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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