Rain

I love to watch the rain

it falls, falls to the earth in silence

shatters to the dirt

feeds the plants of many

fills the ocean, blue as the sky

creates a perfecrt day to cry

all the tears hidden from view

I walk through myself and back again

but I'm still not sure just who I am

I watch the rain just so I know

I'm not the only sorry soul

Reviews

[Lizanne]

Beautifull work. I loved every word of it. "Falls to the earth in silence, shatters to the dirt." You describe exactly how a drop of rain looks when it hits a solid object. Shatters like glass. A very thoughtful observance. "Creates the perfect day to cry..all the tears hidden from view." If you need to cry that is the best time walking in the raining. You can even stop and chat with someone and they are none the wiser. The part I love the most is "I walk through myself and back again...but I'm still not sure just who I am." A lot of deep soul searching. You are a gifted writer. Keep the good work flowing!

[Lightfalls]

This is really nice poem. I wrote about the rain and tears in one of my stories too. It is a perfect time to cry.

When the rain is gone, then there is only beauty left.

[Phantom Heart]

A flawless mixing of the majesty of the rain and the sorrow found in the souls of the broken. Wonderful write.

[Call me Jane]

This is something Jina would write. Are you skipping tharapy agin? haha (inside joke)