Love!

Love has not a price to render
It is not an offer to tender
Love wants to be with lovers
It binds souls filled with beauty, whisper
Don't shy open up your heart as a receiver
Not to be ignored and treat as stranger
You made a sign of surrender
A day was 7 of December
A dazzling year of a calendar
Now love giving us happiness and holds tighter
Truly said it makes us brave and stronger

Reviews

[one sky]

Well, truly that's love.It will make you stronger.

Nice concept and ryhming.

[AYVID N]

I was impressed by the first four lines the most. They were just beautiful.
The 7th, 8th and 9th lines were a little hard to comprehend.
I was with you again in the concluding two lines!

You write so well! Compliments!

[Serenity Faith]

I loved this!!! Very well done Kamran! There is no price with love, at least there's not supposedto be...love does make one stronger, whether it's losing it or having it. Great job ^_^ and also...my birthday is December 5th lol so December is an awesome month xD