MUSIC

(For those who loves music and who can't live without it :))

The beat of music,

Sometimes it's tragic.

I'll always love it,

I know it's worth it.

 

The beat of music,

It feels like heaven.

And when i'm strenghten,

I know i'll win.

 

The beat of music,

I know ii's God's gift.

Life's hell without it,

cant live without it.

 

Author's Note

enjoy! LALALALOVE = music <3

Reviews

[Rose]

Awesome poem. I'm a big fan of music as well, not just the stuff people listen to, but in the subject as well.
Although, I have a few minor points to point out to you.
"And when i'm strenghten" = "And when I'm strenghtened"
"I know i'll win." = "I know I'll win."
And a few others but I will let you know about them later, Loved the poem none-the-less
100/100

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you for that, especially for correcting my mistakes, it's because i'm not that good in writing, but i'll try :))

[Rose]

Same here XD and it's my pleasure :)

[Guitar Heroine]

haha, lol. thanks again. have a great life! :D

[Emrick]

Beautiful poem.
(music soothes the mind.Everybody listens to music. Music is everywhere.

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you for that, and yes, it's somewhat our universal language :D

[Poppie Mira]

indeed, music is part of lives forever!

[Guitar Heroine]

so true. thanks for the comment :)

[Kuhr Gred]

LOL!!!!!!!!! .. hahaha... i like it.. more music... feels like a song
- Kuhr Gred

[Guitar Heroine]

hala, genie, gnito ba talaga dito? mraming mg ccomment? ngulat lng ako! BOOM