MUSIC

(For those who loves music and who can't live without it :))

The beat of music,

Sometimes it's tragic.

I'll always love it,

I know it's worth it.

 

The beat of music,

It feels like heaven.

And when i'm strenghten,

I know i'll win.

 

The beat of music,

I know ii's God's gift.

Life's hell without it,

cant live without it.

 

Author's Note

enjoy! LALALALOVE = music <3

Reviews

[Rose]

Awesome poem. I'm a big fan of music as well, not just the stuff people listen to, but in the subject as well.
Although, I have a few minor points to point out to you.
"And when i'm strenghten" = "And when I'm strenghtened"
"I know i'll win." = "I know I'll win."
And a few others but I will let you know about them later, Loved the poem none-the-less
100/100

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you for that, especially for correcting my mistakes, it's because i'm not that good in writing, but i'll try :))

[Rose]

Same here XD and it's my pleasure :)

[Guitar Heroine]

haha, lol. thanks again. have a great life! :D

[zainul]

Expressed yourself vividly.
The same feeling may be cherished by other music lovers.

[krish]

awesomenessssssssss is here...........
89/100

[Kyle Sky]

A passion for music is one of the strongest passions. I respect the idea and I love how you are able ot describe music in such a beautiful way. There's just a few mistakes in the writing like 'i'll win.' should be 'I'll win' and 'ii's God's gift.' should be 'it's God's gift.' But I stil love the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is necessary to relax our mind and take us to better places. I like your thoughts on the magic of music. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you so much, I'll try to make some more after my busy days are over. hahah, stay tune :D

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing. I'm a music fan as well and your words are true...you really can't live without it. Great piece!

[Guitar Heroine]

wow, thanks for that. yes, music is love. thank you! have a great life :D

[Tasha]

youre welcome and anytime. You have a great life as well!

[Guitar Heroine]

:)

[Tasha]

:)

[Steven Cash]

That is meeeeeeeee

[Guitar Heroine]

haha. relate? :D - thank you! :")

[Steven Cash]

yea i can :))

(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to see you responded til now)

[Guitar Heroine]

ohh, haha, it's ok my friend, apology accepted :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The simplicity and naivity of your writing is somewhat refreshing. It is light and happy.

[Guitar Heroine]

wow, i'm glad to hear that i made someone happy just by writing a poem. i'll try my best and write for more. thank you! appreciated :")

[TheCreativityItself]

When people write poems it always very philosophic. Why? It gives poems more strength, but I like it that your poem isn't really philosophic. (tell me if i'm wrong)
I actually was expecting an other verse, I think you should make it a little longer.

Still a good piece of work.

I'm dutch if you don't follow me, ask me and I will try to explain :P

[Guitar Heroine]

haha, lol, maybe it depends upon the person's attitude :)
but, thank you. lol, i'll try to make some of my poems longer, no worries! :D

[TheCreativityItself]

Maybe I read some longer poems of yours in a little while... (is this correct English? idk)
read moreMaybe I read some longer poems of yours in a little while... (is this correct English? idk)

Maybe you're right, we'll see :)

[Guitar Heroine]

i'm sorry, coz im not that good in correcting grammars too. haha :)

[rnuff]

Simply amazing, love this write

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you for that, i'll try to compose more poems :)