A step

Hey so I've been having a bad time recently and here's a little poem I based on my experience.

Not moving at all for hours on end,
For fear of what I have to face,
Why I am like this--I can't comprehend
But I do it for most of my days...

I haven't got the solution at all,
In fact, I don't have one clue,
But if I just pick up my phone and call,
There's something that can help me through.

One step is all it takes for a change,
Something simple, like getting out of bed,
To another it may seem trivial or strange
But it helps me to get out of my head.

One conversation, one line from a book,
It may not help you that much yet
But maybe you'll find out that all that it took
Was a taking that first little step.

Author's Note

If you have any constructive criticism please tell me.. :)

Reviews

[Tilling]

Thank you for your beautiful creation.

[John the Baptist]

Very good advice in this well rhymed offering. Lethargy feeds on itself, but you have to make the effort to dispel it.