Things you don't know

Things you don't know

A Poem by Miyana Sparks
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What people don't see

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You say you know yourself too well,
But I know things that you don't,
There are somethings you just can't tell,
Sometimes, I just won't say,

The way your eyes light up with joy,
How you blush when you are shy,
The way your eyes glistens when you're about to cry,
How I can see the pain that you hide.

Little things like these,
Are the things that you hardly notice,
Because you don't know that without them,
You'd be incomplete.
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© 2015 Miyana Sparks


Author's Note

Miyana Sparks
The poem is inspired by something a friend of mine said. Hope y'all like it :)

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Really cool piece of work,
and you are absolutely correct,
the little things people do are what
makes them unique and completes them,
much truth in this piece, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miyana Sparks

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
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Gee
Very good.Every body has their little quirks that they are totally unaware of.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miyana Sparks

9 Years Ago

I'm so sorry for the late reply, but thanks! And yes, it it those quirks that make people who they a.. read more
Gee

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
Awesome poem! I really enjoy the detail you go into as to prove you can't know everything about yourself. There's so many things we instinctly do that we don't notice and those around us catch on real quick. Nice poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miyana Sparks

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Miyana Sparks
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