love and cry

all events are not the same
so all events do not create cry

some events
occurrence
create the cry
but not all time

some events
which are created cry at this time
tomorrow are not

which failure made me cry
today is not
which rain made me cry
today is not
which love made me cry
today is not

So after many many days
i want to love you again 

Reviews

[Eliott]

Aww this is nice. I liked the fourth stanza

[Racy Daniel]

Good poem. You know cry makes us free from heavy burdens. Sometimes we should cry.

[KAOlmsted]

This put "No Woman No Cry" to mind...nice work.

[Valentine]

That is just how life works, each day we think differently..Kathie

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely work. :)

[James William Dyer]

I loved the fourth stanza, my only problem with that one being the line "today is not", seemed like something else should go there. "events do not create cry "....I can't decide if I like how broken this sounds or not....all in all, nice emotions, nice words.

[Natasha]

i loved the repetition of the word cry, i think it worked very well with this poem. there is a somewhat complexity to this poem, even if it may appear to be simple. reading it over again, i almost get tongue-tied if i read it too fast. i really enjoyed this write, good work.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A poignant and delicate write

[Leslie Philibert]

Dupur impresses with a simplicity that hides very complex, subtle feelings. I like his style, this is poetry of a high standard.

[Baby Ricochet]

It's kinda fucked up in a fun way. I like it