I want to touch you

Just for once I want to touch you 

Then i shall be something new 

something like a green leaf 

or may be grass you don't belief 

may be beat of your heart 

may be the colours of your art 

may be rain or wave of the sea 

may be the loneliness of a tree 

I want to touch you just for once

Then i shall be the history history of one's 

history of loneliness or history of a rain drop 

or the paddy field of a farmer or crop 

Reviews

[Reeti]

there's a feeling of eternity in the verse as there are elements of nature in it. It's lyrical and romantic. I see some spelling mistakes ('belief', 'of one's etc). Still, someone might want to make a song out of this lovely verse.

[CecilA]

Dupur,

You continually share your heart and soul with us through your poetic voice. This one is especially touching because most of us has been in a place of longing.

Thank you for sharing this vibrant poem with us.

[Baby Ricochet]

I don't swing that way bro

[Valentine]

Feeling that not only comes from the touch but also from the heart is what makes life beautiful..Katihe

[chandlerl]

Wow...this poem was truly elegant and lovely and it really pulled at the strings of my heart.

[Poetic Beauty]

The idea of feeling the earth and nature and understanding it is profound in this piece. The emotions and thoughts are clearly portrayed in this poem. It is thought invoking and magical as well

[InsanityWriter]

This may be one of my favorites of yours. :) Great job!!

[Marie]

Lovely and shining...

[Leslie Philibert]

I think the couplet form is right for Dupur -the images are neatly parted, the poem has form and structure. This is very good, one of his best.

[DrD]

I agree with much of what UfoAuthor has said but I will commend your consistent energy and flow of emotion throughout your works. I see thought and emotion nicely blended in what you write and I always enjoy them.