If i get love

If i get love
i shall sing
like a gentle dove

i shall walk and walk
at night
i shall fly
like a kite

If i get love
or if you love me
i shall swim at the sea

i shall be blue of the sky
you will see me at your eye

Reviews

[Tomi]

You are truly Poetic..The simplicity and yet brilliance of your work is amazing! Very good peom this is..

[CecilA]

Dupur,

I enjoyed this piece.

Here's my interpretation:

When I find love
I will sing
Like a gentle dove.

I shall walk at night
I will fly
like a kite.

When I find love
And it is you
I will swim across the sea.

When I find love
I will be the blue in your sky
So that you can see me in your eye.

I hope you will find that love. May it bring you peace, joy and fulfillment.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Valentine]

Nothing as beautiful as a white dove..I had one for years..he would coo and let me know whan a seizure was coming so I could get down..I was prayed for and healed of the seizures..thank God..10 years was too long having them..Someday love will come to you..wait and see..Kathie

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, a poem that deserves all the good reviews.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Tarry Franck]

So Sweet :)

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[InsanityWriter]

Very cute. ^_^ Nice job!!

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I normally don't fly kites at night but if I was as smitten by love as this "i" in this piece then I just might. :) Better and better, Dupur!

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Dr. Wood ?]

almost like a song

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Tex]

very sweet, nice write.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Marie]

Pish tush!. Take no notice of Baby Ricochet. Your poetry is tooo gentle for his harsh wit.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx