Red eyes

Why are you tensed 

to see my red eyes

What are you thinking 

about our lovely ties 

Don't look at me 

see the skies 

also see the red colours 

when the sun rise 

Why are you tensed 

to see my red eyes

see the red flower 

no sign of cries 

look at the dawn

Is not your surprise 

day and night meet there

you can revise 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. Red eyes can mean many things. Tear, tire-ness and sadness. I like the way you ended this poem. Good to be able to revise. If possible? Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx