love me

A man was shivering with cold
wrapping up a tear bed cover
in a road

Many peoples are passing the path
They are dressy

But the man was shivering with cold

I am that man
Lovely girl
Please love me
and embrace me with kiss
I am going to die with cold

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you combine the last verse with the first image. Fine poem.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad vision create by the poem. Funny how people can be blind to the suffering around them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx coyote