Shirt's pocket

Your heart is not far from your shirt's pocket

where you put money.

You have given many times for the money,

for deposit money,

for better live.

But not a single time for your heart.

See your heart,

how to feel,
how to view the world;

you can live more better.

Reviews

[Marie]

Your poem makes me remember a shirt pocket that was used for eyeglasses. And you don't know it, but this pocket says a great deal about love.

[DrD]

I like very much the philosophical theme of this writing and agree with it whole heartedly. The phrasing is very good and it becomes almost subtle that in its simplicity it delivers a probing lesson. Nice work.

[Tarry Franck]

Enjoyed this indeed.

[rnuff]

I like this it's plain and simple, enjoyed the read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be a better world if we used our heart more then greed and hatred. Love and kindness can fix the world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dr. Wood ?]

yeah..It should be For better LIFE....and end with MUCH better....lovely sentiments though..I always judge people by whether or not they talk from their heart or their wallet

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Libby McKeown]

I like your simple style; but I think you already know your English needs a little smoothing out.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx for ur review