Shirt's pocket

Your heart is not far from your shirt's pocket

where you put money.

You have given many times for the money,

for deposit money,

for better live.

But not a single time for your heart.

See your heart,

how to feel,
how to view the world;

you can live more better.

Reviews

[Eliott]

Wow!

[Stefon Napier]

A poem that gets right to the point in only a few lines but still manages to have a very powerful effect. You as a person have got to give yourself something more than material things. You have to give your heart a better reason to live than just for the sake of living. This poem is spoke to me quickly but even though I have finished reading it, I can still hear it whispering in my ear. Such a delicate whispering and so very true and honest.

[Marissa Brazzell]

i feel like i do not take enough time to realize who was there for me until after i lose them. very good. that is what this poem remind me of.

[Lover Of Words]

Noce yet true

[Blue Ivory]

Deep and powerful. Your work makes me think. It's full of wisdom!

[Tomi]

WOW! message well delivered..welldone!

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Becca Bishop]

Beautiful :)

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Santiago Veracruz]

Yes I could say something about grammar but I respect you as a writer and will tell you that your poem far exceeds a few minor english errors. I have come to appreciate your writing, keep it up.

[Baby Ricochet]

I keep my money in my left front pants pocket near my junk. What does that say about Baby Ricochet?

[Natasha]

a few grammar issues in it, but a nice and simple poem, it seems like it means more than what the literal words are, which is always good. i agree with everything in your poem and your opinion is spot on- people need to focus on love inside of material things all the time