Poor Girl

poor girls are not beautiful

because poor girls are weak
poor girls are shrunk
their body has emaciated
even their b***s are sapless

and also their laugh
does not laugh like flowers

because they are poor

Reviews

[Santiago Veracruz]

You wrote seven lines.

[Raven Starhawk]

"even their b***s are sapless"....that line made me laugh because it just gave me a vivid image in my head of some girl walking down the street...anyway thank you for writing this. It has a serious truth behind it that I adore.

[Baby Ricochet]

You're from Banglidesh so you've seen real poverty. I've been to Afghanistan so I've seen real poverty. The west doesn't know what it's missing. Great poem doc.

[Marie]

Poverty is not beautiful, though some claim it is. Poverty is degrading and ugly. And no flowers colour the laughter of poor girls.

[Tori Hughes]

i agree and dont at the same time, because i am poor and very fat. but i guess it depends on where you are talking about with this. and i agree. i feel like this is very well written, and would love to see me stuff like this.

[DrD]

Now THIS, Dupur, is what I look for when offering reviews. The concept is haunting and shrieks of truth as seen through the eyes of those afflicted by poverty. I absolutely loved this one!

[Kurera]

i'd say be careful where you post this one. quite a lot of girls take this personally

[That_Girl]

If he's serious (or even if it is sarcastic), it's merely his opinion and he shouldn't have to worry about posting it. I just can't tell haha

[Ed Fagan]

As my review states ... poverty is in the soul.

[Kurera]

for some reason i feel like i'm getting ganged :P

[JiDonnelly]

Well actually agree with Clara Ching.
So no you're not getting ganged.

-JiDonnelly'

[Kurera]

thanku very much ^^

[Fantasygirl46]

Not your best work. This poem is more of an opinion

[That_Girl]

I honestly cannot tell if this is sarcastic or not...

[JiDonnelly]

That is what I seem to be struggling with.

-JiDonnelly'

[That_Girl]

I don't care either way. I'm poor and always have been. Like, really poor lol AND I'm fairly flat chested haha

Just a poem, an opinion.

[JiDonnelly]

Lol couldn't agree more, though I don't like the opinion x

-JiDonnelly'